질문 들을 때 생각할 것

첫 번째: 답변 생각하지 않고, 어떤 질문인지 & 어떤 카테고리인지

두 번째: 카테고리의 전략 생각하기

-> 대답할 때 그 전략 생각한 대로 자연스럽게 하기

Feedback & Tips

질문

You indicated in the survey that you stay at home for vacations.

• Who are the people you would like to see and spend time with on your vacation?

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토픽: Home, Vacations

카테고리

• 사람에 대한 Description을 할지 (who),

• Habit에 대한 이야기를 할지 (you would like to -> 현재 or 미래 느낌이니까)

를 먼저 결정해서 답변하기!

학생 답변 & 피드백

vacations at home.. alright

<Tip>
- 질문에 있는 단어 쓰면서 생각하는 모습 보여주므로 매우 좋음! 
- alright이 ok보다 좋은 표현
- 이 부분이 짧아서 더욱 좋음

Um, I’m living with my family, uh, at home.

<Tip>
1. family는 너무 포괄적
-> parents

2. 당연히 home에 살 테니까 굳이 at home 넣을 필요 없음

=> I’m currently living with my parents.
=> I live with my parents these days.
=> I live in my parent’s home

So whether I like it or not, I have to see my family during vacation.

<Tip>
1. ⭐whether I like it or not⭐ 좋은 표현

2. I have to see my family during vacation. 어색
-> I have to be with my parents.
-> ⭐I have no choice but⭐ to be with my parents.
-> I’m totally stuck with my parents.

Um, and it made me so annoyed because, um, as I already told you before, l’m not that outgoing person.

<Tip>
1. Habit 카테고리 선택했으니까 현재형!
made -> makes

2. make 쓰지 않고 더 부드럽게 하려면
-> it annoys me so much

3. as I already told you before으로 다른 질문에서 언급한 부분 다시 상기 good

4. 문법 고치기
I’m not that outgoing person.
-> I’m not that outgoing. [person 제거]
-> I’m not an outgoing person (at all).
-> I’m not extroverted* at all.

So, I prefer to spend my own time rather than spending time with someone.

<Tip>
-> So, I prefer to be by myself.
-> So, I prefer to spend time alone.

-> rather than spend time with someoneelse.
-> rather than hang out with friends / meet people / go out

So, I prefer the things like, um, just seeing YOUTUBE... watching YOUTUBE...or listening to music... mmm.. or just searching the internet something like that.

<Tip>
1. prefer the things like 넣지 말고 바로 YOUTUBE로 가주기

2. seeing으로 잘못 말했을 때 이렇게 재빠르게 watching으로 고치는 거 좋음
바로 이렇게가 어려우면, 필러를 쓰고 다시 시작하거나
아예 그냥 무시하고 넘어가버려라

But with family, it’s so hard because, yeah, my family always wants to, yeah, keep talking with me.

<Tip>
1. 좋은 내용, 다른 표현
-> But I can’t do anything with my parents around. 
They always want to talk with me.
+ I mean, ⭐don’t get me wrong,⭐ I love them to death. 
But sometimes, I just need to be alone. [추가 가능]

2. 여기서 결론지어도 좋음

And so, I really hope I can buy my own house in the future.

<Tip>
좀 더 자연스러운 표현
-> And so, I really hope I can buy my own house in the future.
-> And so, I really hope I can move out* soon.
-> And so, I really want to get out of here soon [out of -> outta]

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총 정리

1. 처음 들을 때는 무슨 내용인지, 어떤 카테고리인지 생각하기

   두 번째 들을 때 내가 무엇을 한 가지로 (Rule #5) 얘기할 것인지 선택해야 함

   아, 난 habit으로 할 거다
   habit으로 어떤 한 가지를 말할까? -> 난 혼자 있고 싶은데 부모님 때문에 어렵다
   habit이니까 quick comparison 전략을 써야겠다!

2. 단어

   • extroverted 외향적인 <-> introverted 내향적인

   • move out 이사해서 나가다

3. 좋은 표현

   • family보다는 parents를 써라

   • spend time alone -> to be by myself

   • whether I like it or not ⭐

   • ⭐I have no choice but⭐

   • don’t get me wrong ⭐

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